New poem on the way

ok well i have a couple poems but i cant find my poem book. it might be a while but still.. There ok peoms too

I might be away a while

Sorry i might not post andything for a while. The creative jucies are all focused on one storl im writing. I might post it on a diffrent website and ill post the link on here. And im only 14 so be nice with any of your comments. Ill post some more short poems if i think of any. One more thing. Tell you your friends and family about my work if you like it because i like knowing what people think of it. \but im too shy to just show it to people.

Not my best work

Its not great but i think ill share it anyway

As the sky turns grey
the sun slides away
but life inself goes on

i want it to stop
all plants, all trees, all people to stop
but it doesnt
and life itself goes on

It brings tears to my eyes
sometimes i just want to die
But life itself goes on

I cry
oh i cry
as life itself goes on

its all one big game
the most terrrible game
a game called life

The clouds sllide away
and sun light shines
and life
itself
goes on

Please comment and leave advice

My first poem

This is about a girl im dating and this is just me expressing my feelings.

I thought it would be good
i though you would be good
but i seem to be wrong
now that your mine
you dont wand me
and now i want you more then ever
you are beautiful in every way
i dont deserve you
but we connect
like a magnet
i wish you were here
i wish you were always here
i dont wand you to leave
because
because i love you
you make me smile
you make me happy
what eles do i need
who eles do i need
when i have you
your beauty stops my mind
i think of you
and only you
i want you to love me
you say you do
but it just feels fake
i dont know if you feel
what i feel
i dont care what people say
as long a i have you
when i listen to music
when i walk
when i sleep
i think of you
only you
all about you
your eyes
your beauty
if only you knew how i felt
only someone who loves you this much
would write this
you may ignor me
i may ignor you
but your always there
always with me
not physicly
but mentaly
our memories are everywhere
the streets
my room
the swings
i tell you everything
everything i think
every thing i dream
my dreams in volve you
only you
because nothing eles matters
but you
i love you
and all i want
if for you to love me too

tell me how you think of it